There is a well developed line of reasoning which is clear and logically structured. The information presented is relevant and substantiated [1].
Your evaluation should be structured intentionally and your points should be well evidenced.
There is a danger of getting lost in tangents in this section [1] which can harm the coherence of the evaluation. You would do well to keep your writing focussed to the criteria of the mark scheme.
Specification links
References
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[1]Cambridge OCR 2026. A Level Computer Science: A Guide to Creating Concise NEA Documentation.
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[2]Cambridge OCR 2024. A Level Specification Computer Science H446. Cambridge OCR.