> There is a well developed line of reasoning which is clear and logically structured. The information presented is relevant and substantiated[^1] Your evaluation should be structured intentionally and your points should be well evidenced. There is a danger of getting lost in tangents in this section[^2] which can harm the coherence of the evaluation. You would do well to keep your writing focussed to the criteria of the mark scheme. ## Notes [^1]: OCR, “Computer Science H446 A Level Specification,” OCR, March 2024, 25, https://www.ocr.org.uk/Images/170844-specification-accredited-a-level-gce-computer-science-h446.pdf. [^2]: Cambridge OCR, A Level Computer Science: A Guide to Creating Concise NEA Documentation, 2026, video, 39:05, https://train.ocr.org.uk/mod/scorm/view.php?id=1893.